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From: wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date: Dec. 23rd, 2008 13:00 To: sales-department@hotmail.com Subject: Products On Short Dear Mr. Johnson, We are pleased to inform you that we have received 3,000 pieces of products from your company on the 22nd, Dec. However, according to our signing of the No. 35 order, the quantity should be 3.500 pcs, so, the other 500 pcs are still not received. Please kindly check your product list, and we are looking forward to your early reply! Your's Faithfully Wang Haiyang