高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；文中词汇表达较为丰富，但高级词汇比较少，单词拼写要也加强；简单句偏多了。

there are trees around in my hometown before . there are fish in the clean river . even though the building was simple and the street was narrow. but people lived the life of poverty . Today , hunge building stand in my hometown , there are a lot of department store . how many kind of cars running on the street. everything developte very fast . but also make enviroment become to bad day today . there are not more fish in the river . trees was cut . it is important to deal with pollution.