新东方托福高分作文:对家长和孩子来说游戏都同等重要吗?

文章用词灵活多样，高级词汇使用也比较准确；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Games play an important role in everyone's life. For children, playing games can bring the a lot of fun, at the same time, they can learn from games. Participating in the games needs cooperation, patience, management skills, quick response and manipulative ability. For adults, games also bring leisure and make them relaxed. According to the data, the most popular game The Honer of King in China has majority users as adults instead of children. The leisure function penetrates into the adult life and shows its importance. Besides, social needs can be fulfilled when playing games. For example, Majiang is one of the most typical invention in China history. Friends play together, chatting and sharing. Also in the history stories, the most intellectual people can present their strategy of war in the Go game. Game theory is one of the most important theory in analyzing the competition situation, which is also a good example to show how sophisticated game is and how practically useful in real life. To sum up, games not only can bring joy for adults as what is for children, it is also one important tool to fight against rival, to strengthen the competitiveness and to fulfill the social needs.