高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；高级词汇使用贫乏，注意一下个别拼写错误。

i lived in the small town with green trees before . There are fishes swam in the clean river . however , The building was small and simple , The streets were narrow . Pepole here worked hard all year round yet live a life of poverty . Today , There are tall building stand in my hometown . The cars and buses running on the broad street. The development of industry to make popullution are most worst . The trees are gone , The fish which swam in the river are disppear grantly . It is very important that to deal with popullution right now.