高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；结构良好，但是语言不流畅。

My Hometown In the past, my hometown was surrounded by the green trees. The river was clear and fish played happily in it. The houses were simple and the streets were narrow. People worked and lived a poor life. Now, here stand a great number of high buildings. the streets are crowded with cars. With the rapid development of the industry, our environment has been polluted. The trees is becoming fewer and the fish are disappearing. It's emergent to tackle environmental pollution.