托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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The chief reason why I support this statement has to do with the current strict rules will not have strong positive effect for the future success, but it is more likely to cause negative effects on the children. If parents always push their children to do something and arrange all the routines specified into every hours for children, in the long term, the children will/are inclined to/are prone to lose their motivations to start planning a project by themselves./后半句也可以变成It is bound for juveniles to lose…（青少年势必会…） It will be strenuous for this kind of children to choose what to do in their career without the help of their parents, for every decision, nuanced or not has been made by their parents since they were born. As a consequence, hardly can they have the thoughts of starting their own business in the future, then how can they be successful? Also/simultaneously/by the same token, the ability of being self-discipline grows its importance with the development of a teenager. But students who are spoiled by the rules always lack of slack on the ability to control themselves, which inevitably will result in less possibility of success. This point is best illustrated with the example of my cousin Mike. His parents are used to deciding everything for him, but last year, Mike went to the U.S.for a summer camp without the company/with the absence of his parents. During that time, Mike was addicted to the online games which his parents did not allow him to play before all the day and spent little time on study, thus distracting his attention from onerous homework. In the end, there is no denying that/it is evident/beyond and shadow of doubts, he did not pass the final exam and got the certificate of accomplishment. In light of the example I mentioned before, we can safely draw a conclusion that the rules may restrict the behavior of children in one period of time, but in long run, the rules will do nothing to help/assist/proffer external support/render assistance to with the future success.