2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and Man Nowadays,with the development of society,computers are more and more popular in our daily life.We make full use of them. On the one hand,we watch the movies,listen to music and look for the information through the computers.In the other hand,we surf the Internet to relax ourselves.Besides,computers can help us do the work in the factories.Well,sometimes,we may depend on the computers too much and we don't want to solve the problems by our brain.Just as a saying said:"The computer may compare to the brain someday."