托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

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When it comes to sports,some people think that participating in sports is worthwhile only when you win something,others argue that the truth of participating in sports is spirit of competition and cooperation.There is probably some truth to both argument,but as for me,i am in favor of the last views. When there is a sport,someone who has more advantages than others can win the game,and others will lost the game.If participating in sports is only worthwhile to winners, the losers have not necessary to participate in sports.The sports is not a game that winners have the rights to enjoy,but a game that all the participaters can have opportunities to realize there dreams. The medal is not the only standard that judge a sporter whether he is success.To the sporters ,what are more important are sportsmanship and fair play.If a sporter is so anxious to win the medal that he violate the rules that used to ensure fair play,he may have to receive punishment from the sport team. For these reasons,i strongly opposed that participating in sports is worthwhile only when you win something.