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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5525[网页划词已开启]
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
要求
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
字数:120满分:100分
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从句数量偏少;文中词汇表达较为丰富,但高级词汇比较少,单词拼写要也加强;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。

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Nowsday, many families have one child. per parents give their child more and more love ,it brings many troubles. for example ,most of children, don't help parents do some house work,even itself sock,clothing ,can't washing it.many of children don't get along with his friend. especially, the younger children ,at home,do not anything,I think parents should give child a space, pratics their ability,as sample cook washing their sock, help their parents sweap floor and mop floor.except do their homework,then take part some activities, let's their feelings itself don't independent their parents ,itself do everything

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