2015年高考作文优秀范文：我的家乡

从句数量偏少；作者词汇使用熟练灵活，但要注意避免拼写错误；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

My hometown My hometown is the city which is located in the east of China, named Shanghai.I was born in Pudong New Area, which is a distict of Shanghai. As a Shanghainese, I grew up in Shanghai and loved all the things around me since my childhood. Shanghai is one of the most important financial centers of China.People live in Shanghai have busy lives and huge pressure.Although a person around us who looks have a satisfying life, he makes more effort than ordianary people do. And Shanghai is also famous as a paradise of shopping.Because of the advantage of fianance, more and more department stores have built up in the center of the downtown. And they have attracted people from all over the world.So it also improve the development of travel business, as well as the finance and our filed of vision. Oppisite to the things I introduces above, in my opinion,the disadvantage of my hometown is that it doesn't have enough well-know tourist attractions because of the lack of high mountians or beautiful sea.To make even worse, the air pollution in our city is also serious that our living ciucumstance is not as good as some other districts.Although big improvements have taken place in Shanghai and have raised our qualities of life style,but we should treasure the things that won't be back like the environment. I love my hometown,espeically the people who accommpanied me to meet each challenges before, and in store .I hope there is a more bright future for us ,as well as my hometown,Shanghai.