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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71633
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;结构较为严谨,文中衔接成分很少。

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The Life on Internet 21st century is a century of Internet. With the development of science and technology, more and more people, old and young, begin to "surf the net" to look for information or to entertain themselves with on-line games. Internet is a colorful world. Here you can look for whatever information you want; you can browse the latest news at home and abroad; you can chat with friends, do your shopping, watch movies, play games, send e-mails and so on. You can do almost everything in this variable world.In the 21st century, people have been and will be more accustomed to Internet. Interact makes the world smaller, and with it the whole world seems to be just a click away. It is part of our life.

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