2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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People also made decision on computer.With the development of techology and economy,more and more people use computer and depend on it in dairly life.At the same time,the question of the relationship between computer and men are attracted people‘s attention.Nowadays,whateve the children ,students or the other people,they seems cann't do without computer.