题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误;全文结构较为严谨。
Since the computer was invented,it plays a more and more important role in our daily life.Today,computer is not just a counter as it was disign,but a necessary partner and helper in some way in our study and life. Computer inriches our life providing information about everything in every corner of the earth,and even various kinds of entertament,games and numberous movie conducted in different countries.Besides,computer can store a huge of information easily leaving out the difficulties of carrying papers.Furthermore,its distant connection makes online study meeting and shopping come true. As the saying goes,"every coin has two side",the abuse of computer may lead to some health problem,not only pysically but also psychologically.And it is predicted the artificial intelligence will take the place of human someday,scared a number of people. All in all,computer is not a bad thing,for providing convenience and accelerating the development of the world.However,as a tool,it should not be use unproperly.