题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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Since the computer was invented, it plays an increasingly more significant role in our daily life. Today,computer is not just a counter as it was design, but a necessary partner and helper in some way in our study and life. Computer enriches our life providing information about everything in every corner of the earth, and even various kinds of entertainment, games and movies conducted in different countries. Additionally, computer can store a huge of information easily leaving out the difficulties of carrying papers. Furthermore, it makes online study, meeting and shopping come true. As the saying goes, "every coin has two sides", the abuse of computer may lead to some health problem, not only physically but also psychologically. And it is predicted the artificial intelligence will take the place of human someday, scared a number of people. All in all, computer is not a bad thing,for providing convenience and accelerating the development of the world. However,as a tool, it should not be used unproperly.