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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中从句数量不足;作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

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Snap judgments can never be trusted In my opinion, snap judgement can never be trsuted, every one used to belive the first feeling, they always hear and believe, so much behavior of impulse is derived from this case, after the event, we always regret after we make decision, but always turn out to be too late, intuition is most unreliable, historical experience has shown that we should look before leap, think over before done, to err is human, for instance, overlord of western chu, who is so fierce that overthrow the qin dynasty, but lost to liubang at last, why is this so, he made a fatal mistake that let liubang go on the hongmen banquet, he was cheated by liubang of his hypocricy, a big mistake was made on impulse, regret comes to late, he paid his life for his mistake, past experience if not forgotten is a guide for the future, now fraud is here and there, the old man fell down intentionally to make the young man to help him up, than he would say that youg man knock him down, if you want to be wordly wise and play safe, the only choice is to go away silently, no one want to be that, but at that time, what choice do you have, to make a long story short, never be too trusting of others even of yourselves

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