作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
As the saying goes, "It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket". It is easily known to us that puting all eggs in one basket instead of in various baskets is simple and convenient. However, as the fragile ones, put in one basket, eggs are more likely to be all destructed when some collision or steal takes place. We can find the same principle upon human.