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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:00浏览次数:3527
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否该活到老学到老。只是因为自己老了,就可以放弃学业吗?你怎么看?给我具体原因并举出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;全文结构较为严谨。

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Nowadays it is common to hear that one should not give up getting a degree just because she is a little older. As for my own idea about this opinion, I believe that everyone has the right to get a degree no matter how old he is. Comming from poor families, a lot of person have not oppertunities to become well-educated, and they have to compete for a job without receiving enough education in school. When they gradually earn enough money to better their condition, it is reasonable for them to spend money on study. By getting a degree, they realize their dream. Furthermore, they can learn knowledges during the course that they try to get a degree. They can improve themselves and prepare for the competition in the future. Of course,the degree is not the only purpose of studying.The person who want to get a degree should consider the conditions that affect the study, such as money, time, energy and support from families.

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