2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

作者词汇基本功很好，但在高级词汇的积累上还要努力；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

The outcome of overusing our mobile phones With the development of our social life, people's requirements of their living qualities are getting increased at the same time. Meanwhile, the mobile phones have taken an important part in our lives.To say the truth, mobile phones have made a lot of convenience in our lives.We can easily contact the people whoever we want to talk.Of course, it's also a simple thing to send a message which is urgent in no time. As we all know, A coin has two side. Although the mobile phones have benifited us a lot, overusing them will also cause some consequences that are not good for us. There is a common phenonmenon that people are crossing the street looking at their mobile phones and using walking sticks in order to see.This phenonmennon can be seen in the not only street but also subway.Briefly speaking, nowadays, people are becoming can't live without mobile phones. In my opinion, that's not a good trend. If we pay more attention to the mobile phones, we will have less time and strength to accomplish our works or something that is more necessary than just playing the mobile phones as one person's vigor is limited. On the other side, spending too much time just looking at the screens of the mobile phones would hurt the users' eyes and it also does harm to our brains. And we can easily find that, with the increasing using of the mobile phones, people prefer communiticating with friends, even family members with chat app to talking to them,sitting oppsite to each other. This will make a distance between human beings which daughters and sons will have less time to accompany their parents as the elders may not have the ability to use a mobile phone in an easy way. In order to avoid these terrible outcomes, I think peolple should reduse their mobile phons using time and do somenting which is more meaningful.