小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇表达较恰当，也能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

How are you? Do you remember me? This is Anna , we met in Canton Fair and you interested in light bulb change .You should reap a harvest in Canton Fair . Did you return to your country ？ we are professional factory will provide you with high quality products and comfortable service.I believe that we can cooperate happily . What is your major products?