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作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；请注意分段。
with the pressure of finding work and lost of the future, many people are willing ,even crazy to text many kinds of certificates.only in these way can they feel more better about their future and they will think that it is the suitable way to show their power.after all,everyone has their own ideas about to certificate.some people even think that you have more certificates ,the more achievement you would gain.so,they would spent many times in certificates. as far as i am concerned, it is have advantage to have certificates in the degrees. but it is not say that the more certificates you have , the more success you would gain. i regards that we should have certificates what we really need .when we to have the exam , we can think clearly that the certificates if good for our future better . many students to exam many kinds of certificates , in spite of that if having benefit. i think we can to exam the certificates which is good for us , and learn to give up some not really benefit for us .
