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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36951
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分60.5分
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增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章词汇表达丰富,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

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How are you? You look so handsome.Do you remember me? This is Anna, we met in Canton Fair and you interested in telescopic pole. In that time you were focus on stainless steel parts of boat, you like our products out of my expection.Thanks for your recognition of our products.You should reap a harvest in Canton Fair . Did you return to your country? we are that professional factory will provide you with high quality products and comfortable service.I believe that we can cooperate happily. What else details do you want to know ?

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