小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分高级词汇；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

How are you? You look at so handsome.Do you remember me? This is Anna, we met in Canton Fair and you interested in telescopic pole.At that time you focused on stainless steel parts of the boat, you like our products out of my expectation. Thanks for your recognition of our products.You should reap a harvest in Canton Fair . Did you return to your country？ We are that professional factory will provide you with high quality products and comfortable service.I believe that we can cooperate happily. What else details do you want to know?