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Glad to meet you.How are you? Do you remember me? This is Anna, we met in Canton Fair and you interested in fruit trees support bar.You showed me the picture of you need product,For us, it is new product .We are that professional manufactory so we have ablity to develop the new high quality fruit trees support telescopic pole . You aiso tested our telescopic pole clamping force,it can load bearing 30kg and any length can be adjusted.I think it is more convenient for protecting fruit trees .