拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
Glad to meet you.How are you? Do you remember me? This is Anna, we met in Canton Fair and you interested in telescopic pole.check the attachment of our catalogue, which type do you like ?You should reap a harvest in Canton Fair . Did you return to your country? We are that professional factory will provide you with high quality products and comfortable service.I believe that we can cooperate happily.