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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12893
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇希望能用的更熟练,不过有些单词拼错了。

用户练习作文:

Witn the devlopment of the social and technolgement ,our life ways has been changed a lot recently years.For example,nowadays,many many people are using phone ,computer or other electronic to conmunicate with friend and families,however in pass days people were prefer to talk face-to-face,if each other had local distance,they will choose to write letters to express themsleves feeling. Of course ,a kind of invition appeared wii make people'life beautiful and convinent.So,we also can take advantage of computer,first of all,it help me to make firends come from worldwide contries without time and places limits.And then it expanded our eyes and changed our study's ways.making us more happiy and convinnently to live and study.The last but not least,

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