文章层次清晰分明,但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词;能够运用简单的从句,但不熟练;请作者增加词汇丰富度。
my best friend is a beautiful girl ,she name is Jane she have a aroung face and big eyes ,she like singing and dancing ,we are very listen to her singing,she have a brother and a sister ,they are very lovely .they are my friends too.I want to we are good friend forever