2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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As a 18 yeas old student,i think i have the right and ability to make decision for me.But my parents don't think so,because they don't have awareness that i am an adult, they anways do anything and make all decision for me.In fact,children don't like this way in heart,sometimes they don't have other choices and accpet it passively.in side of parents,i chidren will not get any advantages from parents which wiling to help do everything for kids,it is worse that children will become more and more dependent. Hou should parents help children to be independent? The first of all,parents should change their thinking,and act their kid as an adult can take responsibility for anything do by them own.And then,when children put forword their ideas positively or try to do somenthing alone,you should be carefully to listen to them and support him.The last but not least,when children are faild in their action,don't be sorry with your children,don't blame him for the failure,it is more important to develop their confidence and independence than caring whether they get success or not.