文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;能适当使用从句,但不够熟练;作者词汇表达不够灵活,拼写错误比较多;请注意分段。
Nowadays,many people are appealing for kinds of certificants obtained from some certain tests. Generally speaking, those busy themselves with varies of tests can be divided into two kinds. The first group of people are these who hold that getting enough certificants can help people have a good job.others belive that