托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

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Participating in sports is worthwhile only when you win something if we want to know if this opinion is right, we should firstly think of one thing that why we joined this sports, whis does we aimed at, which is we interested in, everyone are keen to succeed, but there only can be one winner, so the truth is only the winner can achieve the entertainment in sports, is it right, absolutely no, for the other participants, who paid so much effort in sports, they finally achive the happiness in this sport, and besides, they improve themselves in this sport, competition is the best way to make friends, in addition, we can make ourselves relax through the sports, this is the sport's real value which is irreplaceable， but not everyone can understand this truth, nowadays, people are so impetuous that they couldn't know what is the meaning of life, where to achieve happiness, competition makes peaple become numb, they couldn't see anything but success, if only success can prove themselves, after achieved a success, they want to get more, but who can have been success, if they lost, they should think over, friendship first, competition second, we should wish eveyone can get happiness through this competition, not only the winner