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假设你是某公司销售助理王海，请给David Smith先生写一封回信，内容包括：
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫；
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运，并列举纸箱的优点；你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱，效果很好；
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Dear David Smith
文中从句过少；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。
I am WangHai, a sale assistant in my company. I am writting to thanks you order 100 boxs T-shirt in our company. About box's material , I suggest to use paper box. Because it is very green and paper box can be easier recycle. In another hand paper box is lighter than wood box. Our company with American company trade also use paper box. As soon as possible answer me.Thanks
