托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，高级词汇的使用还有很大提升空间；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

It is wel-known that perseverance makes people stronger. As for my own idea about this opinion, I strongly with it and keep this proverb in mind oftenly.There are several reasons for my support to this opinion. Perseverance is good quantities of a person who want to improve himself or try to do something successfully. Only can a person persevere during an incident, he may have opportunities to overcome the obstacles. If a person give up easily when he is confronted with difficulties, he can not solve the problems that limit his improvement. However, on the condition that we realize the important of perseverance, we still need to think carefully whether the road that we choose is a right way. Otherwhise, if we walk on a wrong way which is not fit for us, we could not arrive the right end.In other words, the more we spend time and money on the process, the more far we be away from the right end. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that perseverance makes people stronger.But,we need to have the right direction too.