2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is Zhengzhou,,who is a big city and it is a capital city of Henan. if you visited to our city first I take you to the xiaolinci, it is an important views . it is kuongfu born place,second I will take you go to kaifeng it was empor 's home, there are lots of ,Ancient architecture,it was beautiful.I will take you go to eat sneak of locial