小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。

I have a good friend. his name is Zhong Zhao Zhu, he is a handsome boy. he has long black hair, two big eyes and a red mouth. his voice is better. he is good at singing. He is clever boy, he likes reading books, playing computer games and chess. he is also nice. he often helps us. our classmates like him very much.