小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. His name is Zhong Zhao Zhu, he is a handsome boy. He has long black hair, two big eyes and a red mouth. His voice is better. He is good at singing. He is a clever boy, he likes reading books, playing computer games and chess. He is also nice. He often helps us, Our classmates like him very much.