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句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；文章用词灵活多样，但请注意增用高级词汇，单词拼写还要加强；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
On Excessive Packaging Nowadays, it is easy for us to find that the products which are sold are on perfect packagings.But to say the truth, this kind of packaging is an excessive packaging. Why do I say so? That's because most of the qualities of the products are not as good as the appearance we have seen. The sellers wrap the products in a good-looking way and make the customs believe that the things will make them satisefied which does not accord with the truth. I can understand the sellers desires to make their products poplular and sell like hot cakes.But it doesn't mean that I agree with them on doing so. A really hot-sale product depends on its quality, not just something confused the customers. In my opinon, it is a kind of deception. And I also wanna to know if the sellers would think about the customers will come back to buy the products of poor quality for the second time or not. Of course not. So the only way to make their own products become popular is that they should improve the real quality of their products. Although a perfect packaging is necessary, the quality is the most attractive point of the things.So I hope that more sellers would conduct in the ways I suggest above. If the phenomenon changes into this way, the relationship between people will also improve a lot.
