2005年6月18日英语四级作文真题:教师节

复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；作者能较多言的使用不同词汇，但还请注意单词拼写的检查。

Today is a spesic day,It is very import day for lots of people especilly for techer,we entent to teacher warning greetings, A lot of things give a great memory for me.The most unforgetable thing maby my math's teacher talk me to hopict.It is take place on my senir hight school ,I have heavy sick which make me almost die,my teacher take me to hospic quickly and take care of me until my parent come. I don't not how return my taecher,maybe try my best to learn is the best way to return him.I have a dream to become a teacher when I great up and take care of my student.