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作文题目:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看？给出具体原因。
字数要求:300字以内。
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；作者词汇基础挺好，能灵活使用部分高级词汇，但词汇拼写要再接再厉。
i heard some throught about living in a rural area is better than living in the city or not from people around me. in my opion,i think i prefer to live in a city,that's not meanning i don't like to live in the rural area,but i just like the crowd and the passion in job,the suppermarket ,the house and the street in the city ,that might make me feel i am alive ,in the morden world,for everyone of our young person ,we like crowd ,and we want to work so hard,we all have a dream which we wanna make come ture. in the rural area ,maybe we can enjoy the peace ,but i prefer to live in the city which filled in people
