文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;层次分明,但过渡词欠缺。
My name is Lili, today I will introduce my best freind Lucy for us. She is a beautiful and lovely girl.We always stay together with study, shopping, play as all. She has confidence of every thing just like sun warming everyone, especially for me. I like her,and we will be freind forever.