2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

Good morning,everyone.Today,I would like to describe my favorite book to you.The book is The Story Of SAHALA.It talk about the author's life in SAHALA and the author with her husband's love.Does anybody here have read this book? of course,I believe.The book is too attractive.In fact,I don't like reading.Especially the long passage,I felt so boring.But after I read the story of the SAHALA,I changed my mind.I still remember when I was reading the book how crazy about it.This is my first time to be fascinated by a book.I like the author very much,I want to see the SAHALA like the author San Mao one day,I want to like he Roams about records,going its own way,a person to face life.I aslo want to have a like San Mao and Jose's love.San Mao forever have remembered SAHALA's soul with hers writing.She is a woman with a strong personality.This book is really good,I hope you can read the book when you have time and enjoy it.That's all,thank you for your listening.