单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨;文中错误句子较多。
I have a good friend. He name is Ben.He is handsome boy. He older than me 1 years. He likes play football and reads. He is my neighbor,so, we are go to school together in everyday. He family have 4 people, His father and his mother and older sister. He father is a fun person.