2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇使用灵活，高级词汇使用较丰富；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用。

Education pays According to the data of the statistic below, we can easily find that there is a higher possibility of unemployment rate for the people whose educational levels are less than high school than those have graduated from the college or have a higher degree. It proved a truth that a good educational level deserves a satisfied occupation, to be accurately, it deserves a decent salary.Although a man should spend more time in improve his education and also should make more efforts to achieve his degree.There is an old saying goes,No pain go gains. He will be given more chances by a manager who desires specialists in some fields. And we can also get some information from the data above is that though a doctoral degree is higher the professional degree, people of the second type have the higher earning than the first one on average.That's because they attract the attention of the HR by their professional technique and abilities. So we can have a conclusion of this data is that a high educational level is necessary,but it won't be the most important element to decide whether you have a high salary or not. All the things depend on your efforts and actual ability.