2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

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China has many festival,but,now,i want to say the Mid-Autumn Festival.The Mid-Autumn Festival at lunar calendar 9.24.At the Mid-Autumn Festival,we can with our famliy eat lunch,and,we can enjoy the full moon and eat moom cake together,at the Mid-Autumn Festival we can follow famliy to play some interesting things in this day,everone at this day will be happy