托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第46篇:是否每个人都有接受高等教育的权力

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higher education should be open to everyone In my opinion, higher education should be open to everyone, in the past, higher education is the priviledge of the nobilities, the poor has no access to it, as a result, the nobilities could think on their feet when meeting problems, so they can be the leader, and the poor could only take the doing responsibilities, both the nobilities and the poor would not let the grass grown under their feet, and keep the finger under the pulse of the national situation, but always, the nobilities could make light work of everything, on the contrary, the poor couldn't, although they left no stone untured in their efforts, the nobilities always stay ahead of the pack, they runs a tight ship, which the poor couldn't, the nobilities sailed through the problems easily, which is out of the poor's control, when the leader saws lack of progress, they would take the matter into their own hands which is a good opportunity for the poor, this phenomenon has been tried and tested turned out to be a truth, so we should give the poor more concern and opportunities, not less, everyone should have access to the higher education. particularly the poor.