2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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In the recent, the excessive packaging has became more and more serious. What reasons contribute to this problem? First,with the econemic develepment ,people love to buy much packaging goods ,and they usually like to make it as a gift to leader or others. Second, the excessive packaging can appeal to people's intersting,so it is good to smell goods. In my view ,i don't like the excessive packaging,because it can pullution enviroment,and make people be cheat.