2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

文中从句数量不足；请作者增加词汇丰富度；衔接词较为不错，但文章结构不严谨。

Now,we at the Xing Guang High School,the have a activity in this school,they want to climd the mountain in the Daqing mountain,this activity can help students exercise and do more fun things,before the activity,we can take the water and do another things.about this activity I think can help students take exercise