正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;过渡词和衔接词不饱和,文章行文较为流畅。
My good friend My good friend is Lily .She is my classmate, we are the same years old. She is much taller than me. My good friend Lily like pink clothes , and she is good at singing and dancing . We go to school together on foot, do homework together and play together . Lily is my good friend ,we like each other very much !