小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。

Lily is one of my best friend.She is ten years old.She was born in Hebei ,and come to beijing in 2015.She has short hair, big eyes, red mouth. Her smile looks very sweat. She likes to reading books , singing and play computer games.Lily likes to help other classmates to clean our classroom, and very nice to others .