小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Lily is one of my best friend. She is ten years old. She comes from Hebei. She has short hair, big eyes, red mouth. She likes to read books , sing songs and play chess. Lily is very nice ,and she always does a favor to others. We like her very much.