正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
When I was a student at my primary school, I like my new math teacher Miss YANG. She graduated from university. She was beautiful, slender, and young. She also made our laugh at mathematics classes. We felt mathematics was more interesting than before. She was very strict to our homework. But she was very patient to us. She can play the piano and sing songs very good.