单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
I have a good friend.She is a lovely girl.She wears a pony tail with a red band.She speaks quickly and loudly.She is a little short and her skin is so white.She likes watching soap opera and eating snacks.She always keep our place clean and tidy.She is warmhearted and always ready to help others.